The darkness swallows you, I lay deep without a veiw. You will die a painful death, Forever living without a breath. I will live forever on, My soul still free to meet the dawn You will fall, double-crossed. I have fallen with what is lost. You will see nothing but night. I will see forever light.
Please be truthful, good, or no? Also, any ideas for a title?
Eskimo Kisses Senior Roleplayer
Posts : 1144 Join date : 2012-10-04 Age : 25 Location : H-B.C
Subject: Re: A Little Poetry Wed Oct 17, 2012 7:16 am
Well the part about yes dying and you living is scary but writen beautfuly. The title could be Forever......
Hero Roleplayer
Posts : 841 Join date : 2012-10-11 Age : 22
Subject: Re: A Little Poetry Wed Oct 17, 2012 12:23 pm
Great poetry! I mean seriously, this is amazing. Gothic, mysterious, yet its charming in a way. Great work!
Zoe Roleplayer
Posts : 358 Join date : 2012-09-25 Age : 24 Location : Camp Half-Blood
Subject: Re: A Little Poetry Thu Oct 18, 2012 5:40 am
Epicness!
Eskimo Kisses Senior Roleplayer
Posts : 1144 Join date : 2012-10-04 Age : 25 Location : H-B.C
Subject: Re: A Little Poetry Fri Oct 19, 2012 5:55 am
I agree epicness!
Hero Roleplayer
Posts : 841 Join date : 2012-10-11 Age : 22
Subject: Re: A Little Poetry Fri Oct 19, 2012 6:58 am
Wed Oct 17, 2012 7:13 am
