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PostSubject: A Little Poetry   Wed Oct 17, 2012 7:13 am

The darkness swallows you,
I lay deep without a veiw.
You will die a painful death,
Forever living without a breath.
I will live forever on,
My soul still free to meet the dawn
You will fall, double-crossed.
I have fallen with what is lost.
You will see nothing but night.
I will see forever light.


Please be truthful, good, or no? Also, any ideas for a title?
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PostSubject: Re: A Little Poetry   Wed Oct 17, 2012 7:16 am

Well the part about yes dying and you living is scary but writen beautfuly. The title could be Forever......

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PostSubject: Re: A Little Poetry   Wed Oct 17, 2012 12:23 pm

Great poetry! I mean seriously, this is amazing. Gothic, mysterious, yet its charming in a way. Great work!

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PostSubject: Re: A Little Poetry   Thu Oct 18, 2012 5:40 am

Epicness!

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PostSubject: Re: A Little Poetry   Fri Oct 19, 2012 5:55 am

I agree epicness!

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Stella/Demeter       Lilly/Thanatos
Dimitra/Athena       Katrina/Akeso
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PostSubject: Re: A Little Poetry   Fri Oct 19, 2012 6:58 am

meep too!

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